For Reading, the group "Charlie" has been given a non-fiction passage. It's called "Happy Hens".
It's about Zachary and his family, they own a farm which has 3,000 hens.
I found it hard to write down information in my own words because copying the words is cheating.
I found it easy to make it up and post it.
Here it is...
I was a student at St Bernadette's. This is a place where I shared my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, October 23, 2019
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Hey Mark,I am Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School. I like how your answers are clear to read. Next time you could write a little more. I like how you give us a picture in our heads. Next time say if you like this or not and why. Keep up the good work
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From Lucy