For our Reading group we were given a passage we read before called Ice cream truck.
It's about a little boy who has to be healthy and eat healthy food because of his mum. They can't eat any biscuits, chips, or any junk food. But one day he went to softball training and won a match. His Nana bought him ice cream which he have always wanted.
I found it easy to trace and draw for the activities.
I didn't find anything hard to be honest.
Here it is
Update: I fixed it and added the questions so that you don't get confused on what I'm trying to say. I only did some.
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Monday, April 20, 2020
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Hi Mark
ReplyDeleteI liked your slide show. I find to trace so you have done well, I like your ice cream truck. Tip for next time read through your sentence structure so it makes sense as it was bit confusing for me.Keep up the good work.
Miss Rader
Hi Miss Rader,
DeleteThank you for the comment and next time I will put on the question so that everyone gets what I'm saying. I will also keep up the good work. Thank you so much.
Kind Regards,
Mark
Hi Mark
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching the slide show.I see mums a health nut thats because mums know best.His nana must have been so proud they won thats why he got the ice cream.
Well done Mark
Trish Wakefield
Hi Trish,
DeleteThank you for the comment and yeah Nana was really proud that she gave them ice cream, also I think The narrator doesn't like what's best for them but also I think it's too much healthy stuff. Thank you.
Kind Regards
Mark
Hi Mark.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your slide show. It would have taken you some time.
Thanks for your explanation. I'm pleased Jesse was able to have a treat.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Bowman
Hi Mrs. Bowman,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my slideshow, I really appreciate it. When I was making this slideshow, it kinda took a while to finish but I still did it. I will keep up the good work!!
Kind Regards
Mark