For Writing WALT (We are learning to) get split up into groups, and do Collaborative Writing. Mrs. Lee had given us our Character, Setting, and Problem. We needed to make a short/ long story using those random Character, Setting, and Problem.
We found it hard to try to make up our own story, because I'm that much of a story maker.
We found it easy to make up funny stuff for our story, just to make people laugh on some parts.
Please enjoy...
Friday, August 30, 2019
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Hi Mark I'm Alvin from yms I liked the way you added the words and the picheres they look really cool and funny. did you tink about drawing the gaints your self?. why did the gaint love Ballet what made him do that?. do you like ballet?
ReplyDeleteHi mark its me HAsan From Yaldhurst model school. I liked your wheres my ballet shoes story it was so funny because you said there was dino who stole the shoe and you also said the dino was extinct because he was so stupid to steal ballet shoes from a giant who is twenty times taller than the dino that was funny.
ReplyDeletewhen you said the ballet shoes got stolen did you mean by the dino because if you did mean that then your story doesn't make sense because you said that the dinos are extinct.
why did you think of this like to me it doesn't make sense and plus it was a creative idea.
what inspired you to do this.
Kia ora Mark, I'm Thom from Yaldhurst school.
ReplyDeleteThis was a very funny and interesting story that sounded like it was a lot of fun to make.
How come you chose to use trolls and dinosaurs.
Was it fun making this? Was it super hard to think of ideas?
Next time you should explain how you made the story and why you chose slides to make it on.
Awesome job, keep it up.
From Thom.
hi mark it me you friend i like how you described itand i also like the idea from mrs lee i did this too but i did the lost sheep and ant maybe work on the information and yea good job bye bye
ReplyDeleteHi mark my name is Ashlee I am a year six from Yaldhurst Model school.
ReplyDeletewho would think that a giant would wear ballet shoes but I guess its like never judge a book by its cover am I right.
when I read thins I was amazed I love the way that you had a special spot just for characters not many people think of that good job.
now what's your favorite traditional tale
bye for now.