I tried my best to do these so please just comment down, if you think I didn't do something right, or I didn't include something.
I found it hard to write down the information, and the order in my own words because it's kinda hard to not copy.
I found it easy to make the Drawings, and the explanation.
I hope you enjoy it and it's decent (really)
Hey Mark,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made your Infographic, it's really amazing.
Next time you could make you writing a little bit bigger.
Good job, keep it up
- Jorja
I will do it, and thank you for the comment I really appreciate it.
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hey Mark
ReplyDeleteit is Tini your friend at STB i like how you made it i like hoe the writing was big and the text was clear to see
i made a infographic to maybe go check that to
maybe work on more images so that i know what happening
Kia ora Mark,
ReplyDeleteYou have created a simple, yet informative infographic about the water cycle and what causes rain. I like how you were honest in saying it was hard not to copy the words directly - think about the unpacking work we do during Reading Groups!
One suggestion would be to have the three parts to the water cycle in order from left to right. This will make it easier to follow!
Tu meke koe! You have done a great job :)
Hi Mark my name is Sebastian from yaldhurst model school. I liked the way you have done this weather thing you have done. Did you know I like writing about tornadoes a lot. How come you have done this Mark. When did you do this Mark it is very good could you make sure to put a photo in your weather blogs because people will not know what you are talking about Mark?
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